Just for a change ~ a poem which grew before the midnight hour. It feels just a little strange but sometimes that is the best feeling for some of my poems. Lines grew from the Wolf watching line and from the idea that a wolf was indeed walking the streets in darkness.
Wolf Night - 29 Mar 13
Breath ~ fine wisps
Wrapped around the lamps
Wolf watching
Softly padding through
Streets of dark night
Eyeless shades watching
A hand of shadow
Reaching cross the rift
Asking to take
A maiden’s kiss
Back to the place
Where he is held
Wolf guard
Aware of hidden places
Times of otherness
When both sides of the veil
Touch and blur distinctions
Wolf ~ Maiden ~ Man
Muse said "You aren't really watching that DVD ~ why don't you write about the Wolf watching?"
happy your Muse interrupted ~ you could always go back to the DVD.
ReplyDelete"Eyeless shades watching" definitely enhanced the feeling of eeriness only to be immediately replaced by the longing for the maiden's kiss.
the final verse brings it all together so well.
exquisitely written!
So glad you liked this poem dani ♥ thank you for your wonderful comments ♥
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