Muse prompted someone else to say something and her words inspired me to start writing, the words and content have nothing to do with this person but something resounded in my mind and my words flowed.
Questions - 27 Nov 10
One o'clock in the morning The stars shine bright In the chill night air Frost glitters to rival the stars
I walk the road Wondering When did I make the change? Not why...
The Moon knows But she only smiles Her enigmatic eyes Glisten in my memory
I raise my eyes To meet hers, questing I plead, beg for an answer And wait...
Dawn Painted sky gave way to cloud And rain My mind still questions
The Sun says nothing Behind his cloud And leaves me to find the aswers For myself
Now that I have written this poem out, I do wonder if it is a little opaque. I know what it is about but maybe I can leave a little enigma here for others to work on.
"In the early hours"...a familiar phrase to introduce the birthing of a new poem appearing, as quite often the case well after midnight. I felt something growing but thought that it was another Gogyohka. It was only after a few lines that I realised that Muse was showing me something more - this is today's offering.
...Forever - 24 Nov 10
Look upon me She said I will show you beauty Beyond imaginings
Breathe my perfume I will take you To places You have never dreamed
Take my hand I will lead you Through places That can never be described
Kiss me She said And you will be with me Forever
I looked And saw her beauty I breathed And travelled within her I took her hand And walked with her I kissed her... Forever
This poem started coming through just as I was going to bed and was completed in the early afternoon. A slight change of style for me with the Poet writing in Senryū and Muse responding in Gogyohka...I'll leave you to decide whether it works.
Conversation - 08 Nov 10
Poet hides kisses Secreted in his writing Shown only to Muse
Come my love Write the words I offer to you Show them to all Without exception
Kisses are for you I cannot show them elsewhere ...They are just for us
Sweet man What use is love? If not shared Thee with me And thee with everyone
Laying another Kiss upon the page...he smiles And takes up his pen
Muse watches Shares her smile Watching Now write "Poet hides kisses..."
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