More from the hand-written Haikū archives.
Weak I - 02 Aug 10
Just a weak response
I said "I Love you" and you
just smiled back at me
Weak II - 02 Aug 10
When you smiled at me
my knees felt weak ... my Heart raced
Lost in the moment
Willow + Soar + Resistant - 03 Aug 10
Above the willow
Wings ~ resistant to rain ~ lift
The eagle shall soar
Rash - 03 Aud 10
Saying "No" to you
A truely rash decision
one I will regret
Out - 03 Aug 10
In the wilderness
Out of the known world I go ...
Your tracks lead me on
The two "Weak" offerings show what could be opposite sides of the same story ~ one, in which Love is rebuffed and the other shows acceptance.
There will be more poems to come soon.
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of course, "Weak II" is the happier of the two. i love every single one of this group! especially love the line ~
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fabulous haikū!
Thank you dani ♥ for your Lovely comments ~ soaring with the eagle ♥
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