The opening line had been lurking in my mind the whole day yesterday and suddenly, just a few seconds after midnight, it formed into what you are about to read.
Edges - 18 Mar 13
Edge of the world
Nowhere else to go
I look over
I see me
Looking at me
Wondering who
I am
Edge of time
Nowhen else to explore
In the mirror
Clockface hands clap
Taunt the faces
Of the watchers
Edge of sanity
Nowho else to ask
I ask myself
The same questions
Over and over
Why am I?
Bordering on the tantalising edge of surrealism. Thank you Muse for your nudges.
this is fucking brilliant!
ReplyDeletethe repetition of 'Edge of' in the first lines; 'Nowhere/when/who else to' in the second lines!
"Wondering who
I am" in the first verse and
"Why am I?" in the final verse!
LOVE THIS! Outstanding writing!
Sooooo pleased you like this poem dani ♥
DeleteI'm glad it had the desired effect
Thank you for your Wonderful comments dani ♥