My word for today was "Observation" and this poem was inspired by seeing the circling shadows on the conservatory roof ~ Muse hinted that there was a poem to be birthed.
Dances - 13 Mar 13
Shadows left
On the roof
Across the lawn
Birds circling
Dancing
Joyfully
Shadows left
In the rooms
On the bed
We danced
Playing
Endlessly
Shadows left
To mark places
Where our we passed
Souls danced
Dancing
Into our future
I feel that this works rather well ... what say you?
i think it worked very well indeed! i love your use of shadows and dancing in each verse! LOVE it!
ReplyDeleteThank you dani ♥ Lovely to have confirmation of my feelings.
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