A chance viewing of a poem written by a young lady, named Ashley, a couple of years ago, caused Muse to bring a couple of words to my attention and the first stanza was born. It took another hour for the second and another two hours for the final stanza to emerge.
Momentary Day - 18 Apr 13
Lightning lightening
Splashes …
Fires onto night
Making it day
For an instant
Your Love
Splashes
Joy into my night
Making it day
Forever
In that moment
Splashes
Of light from Infinity
Turns a momentary spark
Into Eternity
Thank you Muse and thank you Ashley for those couple of words of inspiration.
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i like that "lightning lightening" and the repetition of "splashes" and i LOVE the progression in each stanza ~
ReplyDelete"Making it day
For an instant"
"Making it day
Forever"
"Turns a momentary spark
Into Eternity"
an amazing poem! i'm sure Ashley would more than approve!
I enjoyed creating that sequence dani ♥ andI do feel that Ashley would approve of my borrowing her words for my inspiration
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Thank you for your comments dani ♥