More from the hand-written Haikū archives.
Mantra + Red + Appetite - 10 Aug 10
My hand holds red blooms
always whet my appetite
My mantra of Love
Rib - 10 Aug 10
I feel your breath now ...
on my chest, against my rib,
the sweet warmth of you
"Lost ... " - 10 Aug 10
She smiled ~ touched my Heart
She asked "Will you come with me?"
Lost ... in that moment
Whispered - 10 Aug 10
You whispered my name
where I least expected it ...
deep within my Soul
Shun - 11 Aug 10
Darkness welcomes me ...
in my life as a vampire
I shun the sunlight
Another variant on shun ~ I think this is the third version.
Move Haikū to come and other things too ...
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{{shivers}} from "Rib" and you KNOW i LOVE "Lost..." "Whispered" and "Mantra + Red + Appetite" {excellent use of the three prompts} ~ nothing wrong with "Shun" i just have a soft spot for your romantic haikū. {smile}
ReplyDeleteSome versions of "Shun" are requesting a continuation of contact ~ I like them.
DeleteThank you for liking my romantic poems and for commenting on them dani ♥
There will be more to come fairly soon ♥