Another selection from the hand-written Haikū archives.
" ... and " I - 12 Aug 10
... and then she said, "Look"
Her gaze drew me on, beyond
and, into her Soul
Cloud - 12 Aug 10
Heavy cloud hunting
the sunset ~ chasing the light
from afternoon sky
"End" in the final line - 13 Aug 10
I watched you leaving
No goodbye or backward glance
The end of my smiles
"... and" II - 13 Aug 10
... and when you returned
your smile again lit my life
Beauty filled my world
Superstition - 13 Aug 10
Ladders ... black cats ... salt
I laugh at superstition
keeping my fingers crossed
The Haikū "End" and "... and" II are a Lovely pair ~ if they hadn't fallen on the same group of archive offerings here I would have added an extra one to keep them together.
"Cloud" is breathtaking!
ReplyDelete"Superstition" made me giggle.
yes, so glad "End" and "...and" II are in the grouping together.
wonderful haikū, as always!
So happy you agree with me dani ♥
DeleteThank you for your comments dani ♥