The three stanzas you see here were birthed on different occasions. The second one was born first when I was in bed awaiting sleep, quite a few weeks ago. The first arrived a couple of nights ago, perhaps that should be mornings ago because I was rather late in heading for bed. The final stanza arrived this afternoon [22 Apr 13] as I was contemplating how to put the poem together. I feel that all three work rather well as a unified whole.
Dawn Love - 22 Apr 13
Dawn chorus
In a slightly frosted world
Blackbird sings
A strident solo
While collared doves
A soft choir
Sings a backing song
I declare my Love ~
Spoken in the morning
Breeze ~
She will hear me there
Aria sung
The air is quiet but
Now I hear her voice
Answering me
Sweet words
Fill my ears
And my Heart
There are times when I am certain that Muse plays her little games with me.
this is soooooo beautiful, Ainsley! one of my new favorites! stunning!
ReplyDeleteThank you dani ♥ I really am happy that you enjoy my poems ~ thank you for your Lovely comments ♥
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