A few more offerings from the hand-written Gogyohka archives.
Desire - 04 Aug 10
Desire
expressed in poem
dancing with my thoughts
Suddenly ...
Laid open to you
Nothingness - 06 Aug 10
Fragmented image
words torn from the page
cascade into nothingness
Unexpected outcome
of a random event
"What Big Teeth You Have" - 08 Aug 10
My thoughts,
WHAT drives them?
BIG ideas held
in the
TEETH of a gale
as
YOU watch
I
HAVE dreams
Listen - 10 Aug 10
In the far distance
I hear the voice whisper
"Listen to your Heart
... be guided."
Love has a way
Shun - 11 Aug 10
I offered you affection
Please do not
turn away
Please do not
shun me
Comments ...
I took liberties with "What Big Teeth You Have" ~ I think the prompt really wanted to see the phrase kept intact.
"Shun" has never been published before and it has a similar feel to an Haikū which appeared in the archive sequence a little while ago.
"Nothingness" and "Listen" are exquisite!
ReplyDeletea gorgeous selection of gogyohka!
Thank you dani ♥ for your Lovely comments ♥
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