After my comments in the outro of the last poem posted here, in which I stated that I didn't know if there were going to be more in the "Map" series, Muse presented me with ideas for yet another poem. It has to be said that, I now feel that there are even more to come.
Map of the Dream - 24 Apr 13
Wrapped in our dreams
Feeling the icicles of night
Chiming in discord
Hearing old words
Ring out
The cracked bell of dream
An impress of dark
Glides against the Moon
And shatters her myth
As we watch
Asking for the dawn to break
Fracture
A crack of light welcomed
But is it the sun
Or …
Darkness returns
To claim the thoughts
Fantasies fly to taunt the passing
Mares …
We await the next dream
When these new poems are to arrive I cannot guess but I am waiting ...
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oh! this has a much darker feel to it than the preceding poems in the series! i really love your writing in this one ~
ReplyDelete"icicles of night
Chiming in discord"
"An impress of dark
Glides against the Moon
And shatters her myth"
"Asking for the dawn to break
Fracture"
very powerful imagery! stunning!
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I'm not at all certain how the mood for the "Map" sequence changed ~ there are more to come and the mood will change again.
DeleteThank you for your Lovely comments dani ♥ I am really pleased that you find my words powerful.
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