This was intended to be a simple acrostic poem but when I looked at it as it was nearly finished I realised that it had a structure beyond what I had intended. It was, in fact, composed of two Hakiū sandwiched around a Tanka and it only needed a few more syllables to make it complete.
See Touch You - 12 May 13
Sweet pleasure ~ Loving
Emerging from all our thoughts
Electrify me
Teasing the pleasure
Out from within ~ sharing it ~
Unreservedly
Caring through all our movements
Hours together ~ ours
Your Love always is
Ours for sharing ~ infinite
Unlimited ~ Love
This was unplanned ~ apart from the acrostic part ~ but I feel that it works rather well.
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this is too exquisite to even try to comment.
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Thank you dani ♥ I have to admit that I was quite surprised by the way this poem worked out.
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