This is the result of one of the most extensive re-writes I have ever undertaken. A lot of the original words are still present but there have been a lot of additional parts added. I feel that the end result justifies the extra work.
Rain Land - 27 May 13
Rain darked sky
A spark within me
Illuminates the world
Feel the rain and
Smile
Throw your own rainbows
Through the sky
Whispers suggest
Always something new
Spirit says move on
New worlds to explore
New Loves to feel
So ~ moving on
Joyful smile
Love seeking Love
This was originally intended to be part of the "Map" series but Muse thought otherwise, as usual she was correct.
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"A spark within me
ReplyDeleteIlluminates the world"
lovely turn of phrase and
"Throw your own rainbows"
is another of your exquisite lines!
and of course, i love the last line!
What can I say apart from
DeleteThank you dani ♥ your comments are always welcome and delightful.
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