As promised, here is another of the Moon-Wind sequence of poems. It grew in the afternoon while I should have been giving my attention to something else but Muse offered three lines for me to work with and they became this poem.
Temptations [Moon-Wind II] - 06 Feb 13
In a soft afternoon
Flavoured with the flowers
Of a golden day
The warm wine of the Sun
Intoxicating ~ stimulating
Bringing her essence to me
She offered delights
Tempting me with thoughts
Actions ~ movements ~ sensuous
She bade me smell
The soft Moon-wind
Savour it within me
Pressed against me ~ inviting me
Her eyes gazed deep into mine
Caressing without touching me
Offered her chalice to me
She asked me to drink
The nectar of her Orchid
I thank Muse for the suggestions for today's poem and an on-going thank you to dani who thought that the original Haikū which included the Moon-Wind reference would make a good poem if expanded.
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very sensuous, both in a sexual way and the way you have included taste, touch, scent...
ReplyDeletei really love this one!
Thank you dani ♥ for your Wonderful comments ~ I particularly thank you for your initial suggestion.
ReplyDeleteI am convinced that there is at least one more poem to come ~ maybe more, I hope.
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