This poem took a couple of days to fully form and I now think that it is ready to meet the world.
Night Wind - 26 Feb 13
Night clouds slashed
By the
Sword of wind
Ribbons scattered
Flying free
Flowers of frost bloom
On rooftops
‘Neath the Moon
Blades of ice
Point skyward
Challenging the wind
On the battleground
Of dreams
Unfulfilled
Sometimes a slow birth can result in an interesting "baby". What do you think?
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wow! this one is stunning! {i HAVE to come up with some new adjectives!} the ending is unexpected and truly poetic! amazing!
ReplyDeleteThank you dani ♥ this poem rather surprised me as it arrived ~ glad it meets with your approval ... "stunning" works for me ♥
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