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Haikū 63
A few more Haikū from the hand-written archives.
Sound - 18 Jun 10
Blackbird's dancing song
Joyous sound with harmony
Angelic duet
Devil's Haikū 2 - 18 Jun 10
From the walls, oozing blood
Talon scratches on stone
They're coming to get me
Naughty - 19 Jun 10
Naughty thoughts wander
in the corners of my mind
Teasing me with you
Prince - 19 Jun 10
Her songs, beautiful,
Given in praise of her Prince
Now everyone knows ...
"Sweaty palms" - 19 Jun 10
Reaching for me with
grubby fingers, sweaty palms
... I think he loves me
A reminder that a Devil's Haikū has a syllable structure of 6 : 6 : 6 rather than the usual 5 : 7 : 5
and I have no idea who has sweaty palms and loves me ☺
{giggle} and grubby fingers!
ReplyDeletei love "Sound" {you know i love blackbirds} and "Prince" ~ "Naughty" sounds naughty! "Devil's Haikū 2" is as frightening as the first!
Had to change the gender of the Haikū when originally writing it because a "lady" wouldn't have sweaty palms ☺
DeleteHappy that you like my Blackbird offerings dani ♥ thank you for your Lovely comments
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