Wednesday 23 January 2013

Haikū 56


More from the hand-written Haikū archives.





Vague  -  10 Jun 10

On a far hilltop
vague thoughts mingle with the mist
to fill my night thoughts


Style  -  10 Jun 10

Shining in the world,
like her style, charismatic ...
an inspiration


Kisses  -  11 Jun 10

Her eyes closed gently
Memories touched her sweet lips ...
Remembered kisses


Operator & Error  -  11 Jun 10

Seeing the error
of his ways, operator
only can say ... oops


Collapse & Fret  -  11 Jun 10

Previous attempts
collapse, fall and blow away
I try not to fret





The last two Haikū were the result of double prompts, each of which is denoted by the titles.

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2 comments:

  1. nice takes on the double prompts! "Kissing" is another of your wonderful romantic poems!

    great selection!

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    1. Thank you dani ♥ Still harvesting items from the archives ~ there are many more to come.

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