Another little Love-song/poem which grew out of the first two lines and formed over the space of the afternoon and evening.
Image[ination] - 29 Jun 13
Close your eyes
See me
Look into your imagination
See me looking back at you
In all your glory
Look into my mind
See you
Love holds us both
Entwined ~ intertwined
Sharing the same space
Open your eyes
See us
No dream or imagination
Shows us as we really are
Connected together
Look
See We
The structure is not something I originally intended but I feel it works.
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you may not have intended the structure but it is quite effective. i most especially love ~
ReplyDelete"Look
See We"
and that the reality is at least as good as the imagined.
to say to a woman
"See me looking back at you
In all your glory"
would surely make her feel extremely loved and valued.
this is quite stunning!
I am particularly pleased that you enjoyed this poem ~ I feel that it works rather well.
DeleteThank you dani ♥ for your Beautiful comments.
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