This could be described as another of my "limite surréaliste" poems ~ I leave it to you to decide.
Unknown - 03 Jun 13
Words
Wrapped in discomfort
Said in haste
As if they needed
To hurry
Clothed in sunset songs
The shining silence
Of a wordless hymn
Formed from a canticle
Of darkness
In the unknown darkness
Of an unlimited place
Where thoughts meld
And share a space
With words
Opening the dark
Shaving the moments
From the day
Borderline madness
From which truth is born
Muse is having fun with my mind ~ I rather like it.
For those who haven't been following ~ I am using the phrase "limite surréaliste" to indicate where my works are borderline surreal.
For those who haven't been following ~ I am using the phrase "limite surréaliste" to indicate where my works are borderline surreal.
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ReplyDeleteWrapped in discomfort
Said in haste
As if they needed
To hurry"
absolutely stunning!
i do so enjoy your limite surréaliste poetry, Ainsley!
i must read these multiple times as i see something new with each reading ~ LOVE them.
+So happy to have you read my offerings multiple times.
DeleteThank you for your Lovely comments dani ♥ I really do appreciate them.