The structure of this poem grew in a strange way, I had written the first stanza and was wondering how it would progress when suddenly it came to me. The closing stanzas were written next and then the second and third ~ I feel that it works.
You Cast Your Spell - 22 Jun 13
Unexpected enchantment
Your smile caught me
Unprepared
And I drowned
In your eyes
You breathed life
Into me
Showed me your world
Showed me you
You called me with
Your whole body
Now
I
Am
Yours
Muse has a rather pleasant habit of dropping hints at odd moments.
mmm.... delicious!
ReplyDeletemmmmmm ... thank you dani ♥
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