When this poem was first started the flow seemed to be one way, by the time i got about half way through it started to feel different. I just let it go and didn't make any changes, this is the final version, untouched and untinkered and I hope it works.
What Is ... - 20 Jun 13
Let whispers
Caress your ears
Gentle kisses
Brush your lips
Love lift the veil
From your eyes
Listen to the songs
Which charm the hours
Into days
Watch the sunsets
Close around us
And light the stars
What if … we ask
Can we really
Have it all
What is … keeps us
In its Heart and we
Have it all
Sometimes it is best to let Muse decide the way things flow and the structure of each poem.
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oh! i love this, Ainsley! the first stanza is an exquisite opening and the ending is perfection!
ReplyDeleteThank you dani ♥ for your Lovely comments, so pleased you enjoyed this.
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