Dreaming in the Afterglow

This is my first ever 'square poem' - more of an experiment but I feel that it works...if you don't think so, constructive comments and critisism are always welcomed.





Dreaming in the Afterglow - 05 May 10

Dreaming in the afterglow of our time together
In that moment when all time paused
The place in our thoughts where the
Afterglow bathed us, kept us warm;
Of places where we explored within
Our innermost secret selves...together
Time has no meaning when we are
Together in each others arms





Square poems - like acrostics but using whole words...I will probably be back with a few more before too long.