Another limite surréaliste ~ or is it something more?
Possibilities - 28 Jul 13
Endless dreams
Open doorways
On an empty
Rain-washed path
Through tree-lined
Desert sands
Fire in the clouds
Morning darkness
Mourning sickness
Can we remember
Tomorrow before it comes
Or do we have to wait
For yesterday
To catch up
With today
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i don't know enough about surrealism to hazard a guess if you have crossed that line, but i must say that i really like this poem! most especially:
ReplyDelete"Can we remember
Tomorrow before it comes
Or do we have to wait
For yesterday
To catch up
With today"
brilliant!
Thank you dani ♥ for your Lovely comments.
DeleteI'm hoping that, if I haven't yet crossed the like then at least my toes are in contact with it.
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