Wednesday, 10 July 2013

Fragments


This poem did not go the way I expected it to, I was surprised to find that it ended up as a cry for assistance ~ it still works though.



Fragments  -  09 Jul 13

 Fragments
Scattered
Blown by an
Unforgiving
Wind

 Sun storm
Gales
Scour worlds
Between
The stars

 Gather me up
Again
Make me
Whole
Complete

 Let the wind
Pass on
Keep me
Safe
Here in your arms






I Love the way Muse can shift things so something new comes out.

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2 comments:

  1. my heart's love songs16 July 2013 at 10:09

    it works very well and i've read it three times now with three different 'understandings' ~ i like the positivity of the final stanza, no matter how one reads it.

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    1. Ainsley16 July 2013 at 17:42

      That final stanza grew out of the earlier ones.
      So glad you like this poem dani ♥

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