When this poem first started growing I had no idea where it was going but, after a few lines, I realised that it was a Love song and even carried a chorus of sorts on each stanza. I rather like the effect and hope you do too.
Cloak Of Night - 30 Jul 13
Night
Her cloak of stars
Pale shimmering
Questing for a reason
In the darkness
She had watched
Through all the years
Touched me
Let me touch her
In the darkness
Held me close
Her Love wrapped me
Forever
Eternity was ours
In the darkness
The reason found
Meaning given
Special thoughts
A song of Love
In the darkness
A thank you to Muse for her prompts toward completion of this Love song.
{{{sigh}}} this is truly a love song ~ more than "just" poetry. and the 'refrain' works beautifully.
ReplyDeleteexquisite!
Thank you for your Wonderful comment dani ♥
DeleteI do enjoy writing Love songs.
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