Spring Haikū

This, my first attempt at a multi-lingual Haikū, was inspired by seeing the opening words on the web and I realised that they had a five-syllable structure.  I couldn't pass up the opportunity to construct an Haikū from the gift.





Spring Haikū  -  21 Aug 13

Kaze hikaru
Lovers night kiss ~ Moon smiling
Opening the Heart








Kaze hikaru ~ a warm breeze of spring that follows after a dark cold winter, comes and breathes gently upon the skin, as if like a shining radiance.

I have to admit to being rather pleased with the result.