Another poem verging on the surreal ~ it grew just a little while into the afternoon and waited till just past the midnight hour to complete.
Blending Into We - 08 Aug 13
Where the I ends
The sea begins
We blend
Within I meet you
Where the you ends
I begin
We know no boundaries
Within you meet me
We never end
We never begin
In our Eternity
We meet We
Some of the phrasing was left deliberately vague, I feel that it was necessary to maintain the surreal effect.
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it may be surreal but it's still romantic ~ love it!!!
ReplyDeleteThat was the effect I was hoping for and am glad to have succeeded.
DeleteThank you for your Lovely comment dani ♥