I feel that this is really a story but it did not have the courage to enter prose. Never mind, it still works I feel.
Opening Senses - 08 Aug 13
Opening
Eyes see what
The mind thinks
Ears hear what
Is often not there
Tongue tastes what
Can be a memory
Nose smells what
Is a suggestion
Lips kiss what
A fantasy presents
Closing disillusion
Eyes see the beauty
Ears hear the symphony
Tongue tastes the nectar
Nose smells a single flower
Lips kiss the Love
It may well be converted at some point though.
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oh, i think the rhythm is perfect for a poem! though i would love to see it in prose as well. this is one of my new favorites!!!
ReplyDeleteAt some point I would like to write the alternate versions of my works but, in general, I feel that there is no real need. Still it might make for an interesting project.
DeleteThank you for your Lovely comments dani ♥