Wednesday 14 August 2013

Need


I was convinced that this had to be a long poem, wrote the title and the first stanza then let it sit and "cook" for a while.  I looked at it again and tried to compose the second stanza but nothing would come.
It was only when I re-read it that I realised that it was actually complete.





Need  -  14 Aug 13

I touched you
Gently
Called you to me
So I could hold you
And ask you
Please
Hold me





Sometimes Muse surprises me with her negative suggestions.

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2 comments:

  1. you don't need one more word ~ LOVE your love songs!

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    1. Thank you dani ♥ I Love your comments.

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