Sunday 24 November 2013

Silence Between


A poem which grew in the late hours of yesterday and which is infused with a large measure of "limite surréaliste".





Silence Between  -  23 Nov 13

Words form in the silence
Between sounds
Music touched by thunder
Contrapuntal rhythm
Headache tinges the dark
With unnatural shades
Silence asks ~ can you hear me?
Request for conversation
In the spaces
Under raindrops
In the quiet moment
A single indrawn breath
Dawn





Was this a dream or something bigger or even a dream of something bigger.  One letter changed makes a world of difference.

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2 comments:

  1. i especially love the effect of the final three lines ~ really enjoy your "limite surréaliste" poems, Ainsley! and your outro is quite true ~ one letter changed did make a world of difference.

    brilliant writing!

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    1. I guess that writing poems is just a way of playing with words and sounds.
      I am so happy that you like my offerings dani ♥

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