Thursday 7 November 2013

Slow Dance


Another foray into the realms of "limite surréaliste" with a poem that straddles the midnight hour ~ the date given is when the poem was started.





Slow Dance  -  06 Nov 13

Slow dance
We move together
Feet hardly shifting
Keeping the gentle sway
Letting us float

Slow drift
Through æons
Across the crowded stars
Our dance Eternal
Dancing by starlight

Drift dance
Across worlds of wonder
Dawns and sunsets
Painted for us everywhen
Eternity is not long enough





I love dancing in the Universe of "limite surréaliste"


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2 comments:

  1. the title immediately brought to mind the Johnny Rivers' song "Slow Dancing Swayin' to the Music"
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tmiNLVTDFDI

    i REALLY LOVE this poem Ainsley! your love songs are amazing and the idea of Eternity not being long enough speaks to the magnitude of their love. beautifully romantic yet still fitting the "limite surréaliste" style.

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    1. Thank you for the link to the song dani ♥ I listened to it as I was building this reply and I feel that it really fits rather well.

      Thank you also for your Beautiful comments dani ♥ I really appreciate them.

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