Saturday 16 November 2013

Night Naked


This poem grew just as I had actually entered my bed, of course I was recommended to make a note of it by Muse before it faded.





Night Naked  -  15 Nov 13

She watches me
Get undressed
Stretch naked
Slide into bed
Her beauty wraps me
Moon





An actual event ~ as I was lying back I noticed the Moon watching  me.

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2 comments:

  1. i wasn't sure where you were going with this by the fourth line, then you put your unique perspective on the event and it became beautiful! love the personification of the Moon.

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    1. Glad I was able to perform the "twist in the tale" successfully.

      Thank you for your Lovely comment dani ♥

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