Tuesday 19 November 2013

Zen Thoughts [Haikū]


Another little Haikū, just because it felt right.



Zen Thoughts [Haikū  -  19 Nov 13

 Ripple in cold stream
Pebble cannot be un-cast
Water not frozen



Cold but no ice yet.
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3 comments:

  1. my heart's love songs19 November 2013 at 22:25

    ooooh!! i think this is my favorite to-date (and that's saying a lot!) very deep and definitely true to the original form. LOVE it!

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    1. Ainsley21 November 2013 at 00:24

      I rather like this one too dani ♥
      I feel that my technique is definitely improving.
      Thank you for your Lovely comment dani ♥

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    2. my heart's love songs21 November 2013 at 21:44

      in my opinion, your technique doesn't need improving. that said, you seem to outdo yourself every time!

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