Summer Haikū

Another little attempt at a bilingual Haikū.

Summer Haikū  -  15 Sep 13

Komorebi ~ breeze

Ripples dance ~ puddles of light

Waiting for autumn

Komorebi ~ The sunlight that filters through the leaves of trees.

Waiting for autumn ~ Aki tikashi [in Japanese] also fulfils the syllabic requirement for the line structure.

I am pleased.