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Haikū - 34
A few more Haikū from my personal archives.
Haikū 34
Accent
A hint of Jasmine
beautiful floral accent
reminds me of you
Broken Promises [Dodoitsu]
In the west sunlight, tinting
clouds orange colour, promising...
now cloud falls, rain falls, all wet
Broken promises
[Note: while this is not an Haikū but a
dodoitsu in the folk form - syllabic structure 7:7:7:5,
I felt that it was interesting enough to include it here.]
Night Roams
Daytime slips into
dream, allowing night to roam
where will it find you...
...Imagination...
The borderland where
sea, beach and sky meet and touch...
there you will find me
Savour
A chance to savour
your sweet perfume, I taste you,
kiss you...in my dreams
Diamonds
A little shower
leaving diamonds sprinkled
to capture the sun
Consort
The Queen has done her
duty...born the heir and now
she calls her consort
More somewhen soon...
i LOVE all of these ~ my favorite:
ReplyDelete"In the west sunlight, tinting
clouds orange colour, promising...
now cloud falls, rain falls, all wet
Broken promises"
Thank you Dani ♥
ReplyDeleteI find it interesting that you chose my dodoitsu as your favourite in this set of poems, it is the only one I have ever written, perhaps I should try more...
♥