This poem grew in the afternoon and is formed from a completely serendipitous event. I mistyped the word "more" in the last line and the auto-correct function in Word changed to to "moiré" for me only after I looked away and did something else for a while. It was such a good change I decided to keep it and I feel really pleased with the result.
Secrets In The Sky - 07 Ma7 14
Sun secretly rising
Behind a veil of cloud
Air has a tinge of blue
But not in the sky
Afternoon sky
Just grey cloud
Hiding moiré secrets
Sometimes chance plays an important part in life.
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i had to look up the definition of moiré (as a seamstress, i should have known) ~ that small change makes it magical! the visual is stunning!
ReplyDeleteThat visual effect is what struck me too dani ♥
DeleteSomehow one letter made all the difference to the feel of the poem.
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Thank you dani ♥ for your Lovely comment.
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