Moondark

As promised [ threatened ? ] a couple of days ago, I now offer a variation on the "limite surréaliste" concept.  A darker level which I am naming "limite surréaliste de l'obscurité".





Moondark  -  29 May 14

And in the darkness
Of a Moondark sky
Stars hidden
By the nightmare
And your bloodstream
Dreams

Scarlet screams
Of oft-told dreams
Schisms in the dark of dream
Shining in a brooding night
Pandora’s dream

The tears of a sleeping princess
Drown the smiles
Of the aged clown
Who moves in his usual ways
To please the King

In the dark sky
Dreams are pinned for all to see
To imaginary stars
And all thoughts
Hoping for a dawn
Which never comes





Do you think that I could take this to darker levels?