Wednesday, 29 January 2014

Moon Love


This poem ~ another Love song ~ asked to be written during the day and was only finished slightly after midnight.



Moon Love  -  28 Jan 14

 Moon
Tastes the Love
Smiles
Adds her own
We
Walking in her light
Holding
Each other close
Kissing
In the moonlight
Forever



There is a second poem embedded within the whole of this poem.  If you read just the single word lines in order and mentally add one punctuation character ~ a comma ~ in the right place the second Love song appears.
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2 comments:

  1. my heart's love songs29 January 2014 at 20:35

    ooooooh! i love the "hidden" poem! the entire poem gave me shivers (the good kind.) both beautiful!

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    1. Ainsley1 February 2014 at 01:37

      I am happy that my poems can create the Lovely shivers dani ♥
      Thank you for your Lovely comments.
      ♥

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