This was not the poem I started to write, somehow it changed and the end result is now completely different.
Message - 26 Jan 14
Watching for a message
From you
I still remember
How our words
Intermingled
Blended
Floated with each other
Through our skies
Through our minds
Message
I am here
You said and
Touched me
Touched my Heart
I think it works but in a totally different way.
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i don't know what you originally intended to write, but this is romantic and a beautiful love song!
ReplyDeleteIn some ways this ended up rather better than the original ~ that other poem may well appear at some point in the future.
DeleteThank you dani ♥ for your Lovely comments.
♥