Sunday 26 January 2014

Message


This was not the poem I started to write, somehow it changed and the end result is now completely different.





Message  -  26 Jan 14

Watching for a message
From you
I still remember
How our words
Intermingled
Blended
Floated with each other
Through our skies
Through our minds
Message
I am here
You said and
Touched me
Touched my Heart





I think it works but in a totally different way.

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2 comments:

  1. i don't know what you originally intended to write, but this is romantic and a beautiful love song!

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    1. In some ways this ended up rather better than the original ~ that other poem may well appear at some point in the future.

      Thank you dani ♥ for your Lovely comments.

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