A chance sighting of the title line allowed the poem to be birthed quite rapidly.
Walk With Me - 07 Dec 13
Walk with me
Along the lanes
Past the trees
To the edge
Of the world
Our reality
Growing now
A crystal form
Inviting us on
Walk with me
A request for company on the great exploration of the future.
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love the concept of exploring the future together ~ beginning and ending with the same line is very effective. another amazing poem, Ainsley!
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DeleteI like the subtle change in meaning of the repeated line "Walk with me"
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i like the subtle change as well ~ brilliantly written!
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