Early morning, when waiting for a message from someone, this poem started to grow. It took further form while I was out walking and completed on my return home.
She Called - 16 Feb 11
I woke early
And heard her calling
To me
I went to her
The wind at my back
Urging me
Onward
To where
She waited
I went to her side
She was very pleased
To see me
She clapped her hands
In joy
She danced
And offered me
A cup of her wine
This is another experiment in illustrated poetry - I feel that it works, any comments will be welcomed - especially if they are polite [said he with a smile].
i feel that it works extremely well. your poetry is stunning! love this/these!
ReplyDeletelovely :~)
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as it calls to thee
Thank you Dani ♥ for your lovely comment ♥
ReplyDeleteThank you June ♥ I know you have heard her voice as she calls ♥
ReplyDeleteBEAUTIFUL! *sigh, such a magnetic effect, written so wonderfully and the images are stunning!
ReplyDeleteThank you April ♥ for your really lovely comments ♥ So pleased that you liked my offerings ♥
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