Another experiment in structure. The number of words in each line changes from the initial kisses till the next then the pattern is repeated providing a rhythm ~ like breathing or the movements of waves.
Something inspired by kisses.
Kisses - 02 Dec 14
Kisses
Sweetest keys
To unlock Hearts
Open them to Love
The greatest gift
Given freely
Kisses
On hands
Gentle neck nuzzles
Raise the temperature now
Passion burn starting
Firing our
Kisses
I, personally, like the effect.
i'm quite taken with it as well. another Love and Lust song...
ReplyDeleteIndeed it is dani ♥ thank you for your Lovely comment.
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