Tuesday 2 December 2014

Imagining [Acrostic]


This poem is structured as an acrostic but, in feel, it is intentionally rather disjointed rather in the manner of a half-remembered dream.





Imagining [Acrostic]  -  28 Nov 14

In an open thought
Mountainous clouds tower
Air torn by lightning
Gems of ice scatter before the dawn
Inside a secret dream
Never told in waking moments
Imaging the imagination
Night smiles hold the secrets
Gifts in the dark





Watching the secrets unfold.


2 comments:

  1. don't you feel this falls into your "limite surréaliste" genre? love the poem, love the imagery ~
    "Gems of ice scatter before the dawn"
    gorgeous!

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    1. Perhaps it does dani ♥

      Thank you for your Lovely comments ~ I'm happy that you like this poem dani ♥

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