This poem is structured as an acrostic but, in feel, it is intentionally rather disjointed rather in the manner of a half-remembered dream.
Imagining [Acrostic] - 28 Nov 14
In an open thought
Mountainous clouds tower
Air torn by lightning
Gems of ice scatter before the dawn
Inside a secret dream
Never told in waking moments
Imaging the imagination
Night smiles hold the secrets
Gifts in the dark
Watching the secrets unfold.
don't you feel this falls into your "limite surréaliste" genre? love the poem, love the imagery ~
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gorgeous!
Perhaps it does dani ♥
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Thank you for your Lovely comments ~ I'm happy that you like this poem dani ♥
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