Listening to lovely music, Muse tapped me and said you can do that too...I didn't have time to set up a document on computer, I just grabbed pen and pad and started to write. Sometimes the old-fashioned methods are best.
Whispering Waves - 28 Oct 10
On the banks
Of the river
On the shores
Of the sea
We have been together
Hand in hand
Heart in heart
Souls holding...caressing
Never known before
How deep
We can be
Together
The tide
Forever carries
Holding the echoes
Of all our words
Ever spoken
As the waves break
They whisper
I love you
I stand
And watch
And listen
The waves talk
Share secrets
With the shore
Listen
They talk of us
Whisper...
I love you
This poem flowed even more smoothly than usual and I am pleased with it.
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the whispers of sea to shore priceless
ReplyDeletenice imagery :~)
the waves whisper to the shore
telling tales
and bringing gifts
of wonderment
carried
across the sea
to share
like words...
the waves
build bridges..
soul to soul
in this liquid of time
to carry us on
in vapour form
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ReplyDeleteThank you June
ReplyDelete♥
Your beautiful comment
brought tears of Joy
to my eyes
♥
Thank you
♥
The deleted comment
ReplyDeletehad a typo
that ruined the feel
of my answer.
I am left speechless by your amazing poem and Junie's always wonder-filled response.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dani ♥
ReplyDeleteSpeechless - a beautiful compliment
thank you again ♥