Tuesday 19 May 2015

Moonlight Murmuring


A little murmured Love song.



Moonlight Murmuring  -  24 Apr 15

 I hear your name
Called softly
In the moments
When the sea murmurs
In the Moonlight

 A solitary violin
Softly sings a Love song
About our moments
As the Moon murmurs
Over the sea

 Your name comes back
To me as I listen
You stand beside me
In the Moonlight
Sharing all our moments



I did wonder if the last line should be "Sharing all our murmurs" but somehow it did not quite fit into the pattern properly.
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2 comments:

  1. my heart's love songs22 May 2015 at 08:33

    SO LOVELY!

    I THINK THE ENDING YOU USED IS PERFECT.

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    1. Ainsley23 May 2015 at 16:36

      Thank you dani ♥ for your Lovely comment and for confirmation that I had the right idea for the ending of my poem.
      ♥

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