These really are "Songs" there are four here for your reading pleasure.
The first stanza is a Senryū, the second is a Gogyohka, the third is an Acrostic and the last is a “modern Haikū”
Songs Of Love - 25 Jun 14
Single rose petal
Fairy boat sails on the stream
Takes my Heart to you
You sing the harmony
I sing the counterpoint
Our world filled with music
As we take the melody
Beyond expectations
Hearing your whisper
Every second I am near
Always telling of your Love
Reaching into me
Touching me deeply
I
Love
You
I think the structure works rather well.
{{{{{ sigh }}}}} beautiful!
ReplyDeleteOoooh ~ another Lovely *sigh* dani ♥
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Thank you dani ♥