Friday 27 July 2012

The Lady


This poem grew from a prompt in Poetry Jam ~ I shall not say anything further about the poem but feel that it works rather well.




The Lady  -  27 Jul 12


The lady came
Lay down your words
Said she
Craft a special spell
For me

She told me
What she wanted
Her needs and desires
She bid me build
Then with a smile ~ departed

I laboured long
The fragments grew
Into a complex web
Words chased around
And came together

I called ~ requested
The lady's presence
She smiled
Took the proffered scroll
And read

In silence
With a growing smile
Perfect said she
Laid a kiss on the edge
Sealed

Looked deep into my eyes
The smile in hers growing
I felt my Heart enflamed
You are mine
Enchanter ~ Enchanted




This is my entry for Poetry Jam ~ Do You Believe In Magic
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12 comments:

  1. Peggy27 July 2012 at 21:44

    I like this story with its happy ending! Thanks for coming to Poetry Jam.

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    1. Ainsley27 July 2012 at 22:11

      Hello Peggy ♥ Thank you for visiting and for your lovely comments ♥ I'm happy you enjoyed my offering ♥

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  2. Brian Miller28 July 2012 at 01:50

    smiles...nice bit of story telling...i like to think her the muse and you answering her cal...love the validation she gives you in the end...good to see you ainsley

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    1. Ainsley28 July 2012 at 02:57

      Hey Brian ~ good to see you too. Yes, my Muse and I always communicate and we share some wonderful tales.
      Thank you for visiting ~ see you around somewhen...

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  3. Amrit Sinha28 July 2012 at 14:09

    A superb story ... well narrated !!!

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    1. Ainsley28 July 2012 at 16:11

      Thank you for visiting, Green Speck
      [ fascinating name ☺ ]
      Thank you for your great comment.

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  4. Anonymous29 July 2012 at 09:13

    magical and enchanting! ♥

    thank you for participating in my prompt at Poetry Jam ~ it's stunning!

    ♥
    dani

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    1. Ainsley29 July 2012 at 17:31

      Thank you dani ♥ for your lovely comment.
      Thank you also for your wonderful prompt from the Jam ~ Muse and I really enjoyed working with it ♥

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  5. Fireblossom30 July 2012 at 02:09

    I really like that ending..."enchanter--enchanted" !

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    1. Ainsley30 July 2012 at 02:22

      Hello Shay ♥ thank you for coming by and leaving your lovely comment ♥

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  6. Anonymous31 July 2012 at 21:24

    you more than did justice to the prompt, Ainsley! thank you!

    i agree with Fireblossom ~ the ending is wonderful!
    ♥

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    1. Ainsley3 August 2012 at 16:08

      I derived very great pleasure in writing this from your lovely prompt dani ♥
      Thank you for your great comments ♥

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