Inspired by the wind and by various feelings that the wind engendered in me this poem grew quite quickly...
Wind - 02 Mar 12
Primal Thoughts
Wind
Scratches round corners
Rushes across the fields
Carries the scent
From the Sea
Tears clouds
From the sky
Scatters them across
The hilltops
Litters
The valleys
Wind
Whispers in my mind
…Reminds me
Shakes the memories
Loose
To clatter among
Loose thoughts
Wind
Ripples her clothes
Sends shivers
Through me
Pleasant thoughts
Wind
Strokes my neck
Or is it … her?
Wind
The references in the intro above are to...
http://www.writingourwayhome.com/p/river-jan-12.html
...for A River of Stones
...and...
http://pendownmythought.blogspot.com/2012/01/haiku-challenge-is-back.html
...for The Haiku Challenge
It was only when I was nearly finished that I noticed that the construction was formed using Prime numbers for each stanza ~ hence the alternate title.
We are happy to be back ♥
striking imagery! absolutely LOVE this!
ReplyDeleteThank you dani ♥ I'm so pleased you like my offerings ♥
Deletethe wind...
ReplyDeletecalls us to it
reminds us...
that we were free
to fly...
upon the skies
whenever we wish to try
Wind
Deletereaches out
takes us by our hands
invites us
to join in flight
Thank you June ♥ for your lovely words ♥