Sunday, 11 March 2012

Webs and Dreams


This poem actually started to grow in the middle of the night [there's a surprise] and came fully to the surface today.  I feel that it is complete and have decided to post it now.





Webs and Dreams  -  10 & 11 Mar 12


Spellcaster
Wove
A web of words
About our lives
To trap our dreams
So we could
Live them
Feel them
Be them

Weaver of dreams
Shaped a world
In which we could play
Allowed the dream
To leak
Into our world
So we could
Touch them
See them
Be them

Builder of Love
Created our space
In which we could grow
Allowed our Love
To fill our world
So we could
Live it
Feel it
Touch it
See it
Be it





Once again I have to thank Muse for pushing ideas gently into my mind.

 

14 comments:

  1. breathtaking! stunning! possibly my very favorite!

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    1. Thank you dani ♥ I'm rather pleased with it myself ♥

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  2. woven in the heart
    of life
    spread across the skies
    of our day
    with the magic
    of our dreams
    playing in the wonders
    of this amazing sea


    beautiful spell.. danced in words

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    1. Dreamweaver and Spellcaster
      work together to shape
      the Magic
      into the wonders
      we desire

      Thank you June ♥ for dropping by and for your lovely words ♥

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  3. Awesome piece, I liked how the last lines were compounded in each verse. Very interesting:)

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    1. Thank you Kimolisa ♥ So pleased you like my little offering.
      It is always my intent to create something a little out of the ordinary ♥
      Thank you for visiting and for your lovely comments ♥

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  4. nice...i like the magic in this...the creation of that space to love and really live it in that last stanza...

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    1. Good to see you Brian ~ Magic IS what poetry is all about ~ thank you for your great comments

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  5. Dreams are the nourishment of the soul, as you show here.

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    1. Hello Joy ♥ Dreams are also the place to try out new ideas and a place to play ♥
      Thank you for your lovely comments ♥

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    1. Thank you Teresa ♥ so pleased that you love my little offerings ♥

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  7. Beautifully written -- resonates deep within. Thank you for sharing!

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    1. Hello becca ♥ thank you for your really lovely comments ♥

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