This poem actually started to grow in the middle of the night [there's a surprise] and came fully to the surface today. I feel that it is complete and have decided to post it now.
Webs and Dreams - 10 & 11 Mar 12
Wove
A web of words
About our lives
To trap our dreams
So we could
Live them
Feel them
Be them
Weaver of dreams
Shaped a world
In which we could play
Allowed the dream
To leak
Into our world
So we could
Touch them
See them
Be them
Builder of Love
Created our space
In which we could grow
Allowed our Love
To fill our world
So we could
Live it
Feel it
Touch it
See it
Be it
Once again I have to thank Muse for pushing ideas gently into my mind.
breathtaking! stunning! possibly my very favorite!
ReplyDeleteThank you dani ♥ I'm rather pleased with it myself ♥
Deletewoven in the heart
ReplyDeleteof life
spread across the skies
of our day
with the magic
of our dreams
playing in the wonders
of this amazing sea
beautiful spell.. danced in words
Dreamweaver and Spellcaster
Deletework together to shape
the Magic
into the wonders
we desire
Thank you June ♥ for dropping by and for your lovely words ♥
Awesome piece, I liked how the last lines were compounded in each verse. Very interesting:)
ReplyDeleteThank you Kimolisa ♥ So pleased you like my little offering.
DeleteIt is always my intent to create something a little out of the ordinary ♥
Thank you for visiting and for your lovely comments ♥
nice...i like the magic in this...the creation of that space to love and really live it in that last stanza...
ReplyDeleteGood to see you Brian ~ Magic IS what poetry is all about ~ thank you for your great comments
DeleteDreams are the nourishment of the soul, as you show here.
ReplyDeleteHello Joy ♥ Dreams are also the place to try out new ideas and a place to play ♥
DeleteThank you for your lovely comments ♥
Really loving this :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Teresa ♥ so pleased that you love my little offerings ♥
DeleteBeautifully written -- resonates deep within. Thank you for sharing!
ReplyDeleteHello becca ♥ thank you for your really lovely comments ♥
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