This poem took quite a long time to grow, the first stanza appeared a few nights ago followed by a rather long gap but, suddenly, last night the remainder appeared quickly and smoothly. So, now, here is...
The Garden of Infinity - 25 & 29 Mar 12
Her footsteps
Gently caressed the lawn
Silent
As a whisper
In the night
Her feet
Kissed by the dew
Washed by beauty
Then dried
By the sun at dawn
Her smile
Pales the intensity
Of the rose
And makes the day
Even warmer
Her Soul
Patiently waiting
In the Garden
For her Lover
To join her
Gently caressed the lawn
Silent
As a whisper
In the night
Her feet
Kissed by the dew
Washed by beauty
Then dried
By the sun at dawn
Her smile
Pales the intensity
Of the rose
And makes the day
Even warmer
Her Soul
Patiently waiting
In the Garden
For her Lover
To join her
It is quite unusual for a poem to take a long while to grow or rather - emerge into the world but even then I am usually pleased with the result. Thank you Muse.
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"Her smile
ReplyDeletePales the intensity
Of the rose"
{sigh} i love your romantic poetry! so beautiful!
Thank you so much dani ♥ for your lovely comments ♥
DeleteSometimes what emerges surprises me ♥